Monday, 12 December 2016

The Hungry Squirrel


              The Hungry Squirrel

Early one morning near the edge of the forest there was a small squirrel gathering nuts while a hawk was gliding high in the sky.
                                                                                                                                                           
The squirrel sensed something was wrong.The squirrel heard something. Something was wrong he could here swooping. He lifted his tail and slowly raised his head. Danger. it was a dangerous hawk. He was frightened and scared.The squirrel was anxious and puffed up as he planted his paws in the ground the fur was spiked up.

The hawk had a sharp yellow beak. He had a white and brown body with dark red eyes.

As the hawk swooped down like a spear.The squirrel heard swooping, swooping down, it was a hawk.The squirrel knew to run into the forest he got ready to run in the bushy forest. The hawk went as fast as lightning  to find the squirrel.

The hawk found the squirrel he swooped down the squirrel could hear the hawk swooping
down and grabbed the squirrel’s tail.The squirrel wiggled and jiggled.He dropped the squirrel
down.The squirrel rushed into his home.The hawk swooped up into the sky.The squirrel was
free to gather more nuts.    

2 comments:

  1. Great story James. I love your description of the hawk and the squirrel throughout your story. Well done son!

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  2. Great story James. I love your description of the hawk and the squirrel throughout your story. Well done son!

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